I was never really sure whether this poem is any good. Let me know!
Walking
My feet
Hit the
Ground
At 90
Miles per hour
And they
Never get tired.
Taking
Sparse steps
Giant steps
Dance steps
Lingering steps
Guilty runaway
Steps.
There goes the
Door knocker;
The fleeting impression.
The voice in the wind
The face at the window.
Steps to take
Danger away
But none to take the throb away.
There are more steps to
Take, though.
Into darkness
Into the smog
All the while
Singing a
Walking song.
I like it, how you talk about the steps, but we don't know where they are going.
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