A poem for a poetry blog

Hi Everyone,
This is a poetry blog. So i think its fitting that I begin with a poem :)

This poem is called Night Creature, its not one of my best ones, but, hey, I like it.
Feedback is appriciated :)

Night Creatures

The evil beats inside its heart

Prowling our streets after dark

The anger lives in its soul

Eyes burning as if coal.

Little stones leave scars so deep

Thrusting others into sleep.

Its footsteps light, unheard until

Others blood it does spill.




To its place it does retire

With poison it smothers the fire.

The metal falcon returns at last

Hooded now, its flight is past.

The falconer dreams a deadly dream

He aims and fires, he is unseen.

The beast a man, his footprints

Left where death has been.

There we go! I hoped you liked it.